Project
2.2 Peer Review Worksheet
Editor’s Name: Kathy
(Kaiyi Qian)
Writer’s Name: Carol
(Wenbo Pan)
1) Provide a
brief paragraph-by-paragraph outline of your partner’s draft
Para 1: three elements in
Cinderella’s story, villain, helper and transition. Summary the film Desert Flower
Para
3: Analyze element 2, helper in both story and film
Para
4: Analyze element 3, transition in both story and film
Para
5: Conclusion
2) Any
suggestions for improving this outline/organization?
In para 1, after
summary the film Desert Flower, a brief element analyze
of the film would be better.
3) Identify
any qualifying statements in the draft using a yellow highlighter. (How many
did you find?)
2
4) Identify
any rhetorical questions in the draft using a green highlighter. How many did
you find?
0
5) Identify
any inconsistencies in verb tense using a blue highlighter. How many did you
find?
10
6) Identify areas
that lack specificity using a pink highlighter. List what you found here.
4
7) Identify any problems in ordering information
using an orange highlighter. Explain why the ordering is confusing.
0
8) What is the most interesting part of the essay?
Analyze the transition has psychological
impact in the film, Desert Flower.
9) What is the least interesting part of the
essay?
Analyses of the three elements in
Cinderella story.
10) Provide a refutation for/argument against the essay. In what
way(s) is this film NOT fit the definition of a Cinderella story?
There’s no identify object in
the film.
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